Comments : Moment of affinity

  • 15 years ago

    by isabel

    This poem is so incredibly sweet... I am amazed :)

    *rock on* ;)

    isabel

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Great piece of poetry, I truly enjoyed:)
    You got across the deep emotions you feel when two lovers meet, really nice!

    Welcome to our club:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Wow so passionate and breath takeing.

    good write.

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very well written I cannot find a thing to criticize here The sensual wording stirs much passion

    well done

  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Loved it =] The chioce of wording was beautiful and the flow was perfect. I really enjoyed this poem you captivated me with your descriptions so a def. 5/5