This is gorgeous, love. i love the shortness of the lines just..it flows very well. the beginning made me think of that song that's like "these are a few of my favourite things" and then you slowly watch it grow and transform. which i love, when a poem shows growth and a journey.

you're not always wrong, babes. you're beautiful and smart, and wonderful. and i love you. keep your chin up, krissco. there's something better on it's way, if you wait long enough.

5/5

I love this.
I love the flowiness of it,
and how it shows the journey of growing up.
[:

5/5

Don't give up dear. :/ That is the worst thing you can do everr.

I know you're probably likee whattt, Karyssa is commenting my poemss. Yeaah. I am.

And I absolutely just adore this one. :) I used to watch Barney like...all day every day. Whoo.

Great job expressing yourself though.