Comments : Flower

  • 12 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    Loved this poem. Keep up the great work hun never stop writing. Trust me u will never feel the same when u do.

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    That's an amazing poem, but you have one grammatical . You wrote "pedals," instead of "petals." Pedals are on a bicycle; petals are on flowers.

    5/5
    -Heather

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Amazing poem :)

  • 11 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Wow great one i liked it

    Just lay in your sanctuary which you thought was home
    It's just a fray of everything I've ever known .....a tip top piece keep up 5/5