I'm amazed by what you've written. Speechless in fact. I love your style and the way that you portray your feelings with such ease. The flow was also brilliant which just added more to the feeling behind this poem.

Just onet hing though
"weather I should give in," - shouldn't it be whether?

Brilliantly written. 5/5 from me!

I love this, its written very well too!
5/5

I love this poem great write im favoriting 5/5