"I was lost in confusion
Mind almost suppressed
Ensnared to this trial
Yet, mesmerized with your smile
I strolled each road of admiration
Where red roses and chocolates
Cannot debate nor overcome you
Yet, emptiness suddenly grew." Oh my goodness, you are unique. Your words are so powerful and it not only captured the eyes, but the mind where it makes thoughts overflow. I enjoyed your write and even craven to read more. Keep it up 5/5, kel.

Your poetry is like reading a fresh Rumi

great work