Haha Grant, what a sad moment that must have been for you!
First off, i looked at the title and i looked at the category you put it in and i was like.. hmm.. thats.. different. Haha. But i understand now :]
That was really good, it made me laugh.
And, if you ever need a shoulder to cry on, ill be here, i know how much that would have hurt you. Lol.
5/5

I was like Cara, the title and the category made me wonder what you had written about. It is funny and I needed a smile this morning. Thanks. 5/5

Not what I was expecting at all! This was brilliantly executed, and wildly funny. I loved it! Really nice, original writing here my friend.

'My sweetest sweetheart lost and gone
You've left me now, I'm all alone
It's been months now since your suicide
I'm left alone, on life's lonely ride'

-Oh how sad this stanza is, what a feeling of grief and incompleteness you have pictured. .I wonder if this happens to me. I assume I could eventually die from a great loss. How unworthy your life is when you have lost someone you have treated as your everything.

"So many hours spent in your company
My friends all laugh when they look at me
They shake their heads and laugh out loud
They say my grief just makes them proud"
-*A Huge Question Mark* ( ? )I really didn't get this one, how come friends seems to be untroubled by their friends grief to his loved one, to offer condolence instead a feeling of proud have been shown, how rude as they commit this actions -.- *reading again*

"You blew a hole right through your head
I tried and tried to resuscitate, but you were dead
My heart is broken that's for sure
The love we had was something pure"
-*Suicide* first of all, problems cannot be resolved by suicidal acts, it's just a trial for us to sustain solution. How frowning this was, I was wondering of a reason why the act was committed. What a gloomy aura you have painted here.

"I wipe these tears with oily hands
I squeeze you tight I'm just a man
Mike just wet himself he laughed so hard
Tony's rolling around in the yard"
-What a tragic scene I can imagine *reminds me of my teacher who shot his wife, begging for forgiveness while it's too late* I'm sorry for the child to grow up with no mother's presence which is essential for his well being Y_Y

"Your broken pistons on the floor
I don't think I can take anymore
Vernon sits and drinks his beer
He wipes away a compassionate tear"
-Another tragic scene here, all you can do is accept the reality and the reality would bring a whole new life. So, so sorry, acceptance and moving on would be the only remaining option instead of suffering the past.

"His poor old Honda, blew its head
Died much the same way, now it's dead
We sat and wiped the tears with our shirts
While Mike and Tony howled with mirth"
-*frown accompanied with a sigh* I'm really intrigued why she committed suicide, the entire poem didn't really gave me an idea. The whole scene was painted perfectly.

A very well written piece, so emotional and sad. It's just about problems shouldn't be take seriously, for God had bestowed us with trials, it's on our hands on how we handle it, at the end of the road we will benefit something. and that is experiences.

you have my vote
=5/5=

Lol alrighty then Grant. Interesting piece to say the least.. at the beginning. I was like why is this funny but as I continued I started to giggle.. your imagination is .. interesting. Someone was bored writing this I see.. loll.. just kidding. A great flowing poem.. quite humerous.

5/5.

Lmao Grant, but I think you must have pulled the trigger;)

My brother is a fan of motorcycles too. He bought a Kawasaki 1000cc the day he got his permit and we went away with it many times. It always felt like I was flying when I sat in the back seat, holding on to his waist:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Yes we do get that way about them almost as bad as with our pets. Only we can't dress them up as fine as we can the pets.

Amen to that. I had one that emptied her guts all over a busy road. A sad loss. Apparently they love their oil.

Some how I suspect Suzi still howls through the night and glistens in the sun of each new day on another bike or two .........
Still slinging her chain lube along the road less traveled . Thanks for the ride Grant , I'll say a little prayer for Suzi, that her tank is always half full as she hungers for more 5/5

Ha ha ha you are so talented!!!!
lol when i was reading this i was wondering why you had put it under funny poems and didn't quite understand. lol until i got to the end and saw honda... a really clever piece =) well done you did an awesome job =) keep well!!