I love the styl;e os this poem. It's like nothing I've ever read before. Very emotional piece. It was clever to connect dreams with reality. Most people tr to point out their differences. Nice work. Nik

This was very well written. The emotion put behind the piece reached out to grasp me, and captured my attention. Very nicely written. 5/5

Can definitely relate strong emotions showed words flow nicely 5/5

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