I am really impressed the depth of this one is the spice that will keep me pondering for days and that is just the way I love great poetry. The flawless flow also satifies my tastes
well done
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Once again your rhyming is really good. I was curious, why do you capitalise random words? I was thinking maybe those specific words were actually signifying something bigger, like a higher being and that's why they were capitalised... but it just kind of confused me. Either way, I enjoyed the read. :)

They are not random at all, actually. in fact you're right, they do have a bigger meaning. the point is to get to the reader to think and figure it out :]