Well Jim its been a long time coming my dear friend, this poem exudes love and tranquility.
It seems you found the peace that i prayed you would find, that quiet place within, this was excellent , although different.
A most enjoyable relaxing read
Well done

Grant

It is relaxing and wonderfully written love poem. A different style but is great for the feelings you express. The person who prompted this poem must be an extraordinary person for they have given you these feelings of love. The last line really is the best, just saying Thank You to the person you love. Sometimes that means more than any other thing or words in the universe. Excellent write. 5/5

A beautiful dedication to someone special. I found the structure very distracting though and didn't care for the overuse of filler words. Still a nice sentiment though.

I didn't really favor the structure of the poem but it was heart felt. Great poem indeed (:

Well Jim, I will be honest with you. When I opened up the page, I thought to myself: what's this? But as I read it, I saw the sincerity in your words and sometimes the message can be more important then the format..so all in all it was a great poem after all:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

That was so beautiful

A BEAUTIFULY written piece. Very different.. but outstanding! I really enjoyed this poem of love... and am looking forward to reading more of your poems :]
LOL,
Olwin.

Olwin.

THis is indeed something different and at the
same time it is fiiled with such tender feelings..really really nice read :)