Wishes we all have for TJ and he truly deserves them all. 5/5

:)
now THAT was the sweety ingrid i know ;)

such sweet wishes :) i wish the same for TJ...

keep that coming...

This is such a sweet dedication to a special person in your life.

"To the one who is the bravest
Of all people I have ever known
I wish you to have the very best
and a happy family of your own"

This is so touching and heartfelt, for you wish good upon him for the rest of his life.

"A beautiful house in the fields
with a white picket fence
Lots of animals in the barn,
dogs to come to your defense"

Great rhyming choice, you really make this sound so enchanting and wonderful!

"A petite fair haired princess
with a heart made of gold
and a bunch of sweet children
just too much for you to hold"

Well-expressed thoughts, the descriptions were flawless here, this is so nice of you to want your friend to have all this.

"A little pony that will carry
them with arms around his neck
With you leading them around,
like once your daddy did way back"

Excellent words, this is making me smile as I know TJ will love it to death.

"I wish for the sun to shine upon you
Every day of your precious life
But most of all I wish you love and
happiness in a world without strife"

How meaningful you have made this piece, straight from the heart for sure. Great work, a flawless dedication! 5/5 from me, take care and God Bless you!

~MaryAnne

Such a sweet poem Ingrid :]
Your description was beautiful, what a nice thing to write for TJ.
The flow was really good too, what a lovely thing to do :]

5/5

A sweet simple dedication to a very deserving friend of ours. I think we all wish him the best and to have all his dreams and wishes to come true just like you have said in this poem.

Well done.

5/5.

Simple and loyal wishes...nothing can be more sweet and thoughtful than this...Weldone!

Very gentle and sweet and very realistic good job

And you deserve this all right back from this stunning dedication.

the adjectives where vivd, the flow was smooth, the rhymes wer complimentary and the feeling was oh so uplifting.

you have done well to put this together, TJ must have been speechless.

A sweet poem Ingrid, describing the life most of us humans would love to have in this short stay on the earth.
A great testament to your friend TJ.
Well penned Ingrid!