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by peter standish   Feb 28, 2009


I feel so empty writing this,
The time you were loving me I will greatly miss.
Right now my world is collapsing, everything feels so wrong, I wish I still had you Helena, you held me tight, and made me feel so strong.
You told me you loved me and that we would always be, all the love I have for you I know that you can see.
You say that you still love me, I really hope that this is true, The sinking feeling in my heart right now indicates what I feel for you.
But now my life is getting to hard to bare, I miss you lots and only have my thoughts of the time that we did share.
The arguments where our downfall, but we shouldn't of let them win, especially after the day that we put them in the bin.
I'm sorry I upset you I'll regret it all my life, we are both hurting now, we could try again, I still want you to someday be my wife.
So as I think of you and the time we had, I ask! - if this is the right thing to do, then why are we both so sad?

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