Comments : Broken

  • 16 years ago

    by Vivica

    Well thanks :) Yeah, I am very dark with my emotions. And I don't really do ..structure...I just write it how I say it in my head...which, I guess is what you're supposed to do :)

  • 16 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    It was like when you go down a mountain,(stay with me now)lol
    you get relief from the stress...it wasn't like other poems and i think the different form makes it a relief, and so moving
    keep writing