Comments : Looking Down on Us

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    A beautiful piece. very expressive. you told just i how i feel. you took the words right out of me, it's amazing.

    There are just some questions I have
    The ones I know there is no answer to
    Why did you have to die so young?
    Why did it have to be you?

    this line gave me the goosebumps! especially the last two lines because my brother past at a young age and this poem reminded me of him so much. i'm sorry for your losses. keep your head up! 5/5.

    -Ashlei.