Comments : Don't Go Away Mad {Just Go Away}

  • 11 years ago

    by umbra

    I really liked this poem! If someone read this to me when they were explaining why we needed time apart I might actually understand what was going on! The rhyme of the poem sounded a bit stilted in my head, but that seemed to add to the emotion in my view. I think there might be a problem here? "To spread our your wings " I loved it! 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I like your rhyming style for real I thought dylan was the only one that could rhyme four without using a little too much force and your message is loud and clearly free wheelin

  • 11 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    That was a great poem :]
    Good rhyme scheme and great flow. I loved it