Waiting To Be Broken

by Lost and Delirious   Mar 9, 2009


I've put my heart out there
again and again.

Tis a death wish I do have?

I seek an answer from the stars,
but no answer do they give me.

If one must find love,
one must risk hurt.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    'Tis a death wish I do have?'

    ^^that line sounds odd to me, like it doesnt fit somehow with the rest of the poem, the flow is good and the wording is great, nice one again young lady.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Liz

    5/5 Sounds like me right there!