Through it all

by Marissa Anne   Mar 11, 2009


You were there when i needed you
when i was upset and didnt know what to do
you could keep me standing tall
~you were there through it all~
You were there when i was hurt
to help me stand and brush off the dirt
even when you caused me to fall
~you were there through it all~
you are still here and i thank you
but i feel something diffrent something new
its like you drifted away from me
and i.....i cant see
i dont know what i did
but your out off sight
darkness has fallen there is no light
your standing there behind a brick wall
~why are you letting me fall?~
one question if i may please
what will happen if you leave
and my feelings stay the same
what if i cry and cry because of all the pain
would you pick up if i were to call
do you think you'd be there at all?

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jay Perry Jr

    This is the best poem i read all day

    Great job keep it up :)

  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    Hey there I've been reading all of your poems and I think this is one of the best you have written.
    I feel the pain here, I have felt the same and I wanna tell you that if this guy goes away from, he won't come back. The best thing you could do is to move on, even though I know it's a hard thing to do.
    This poem is great, as I said before, the ending is so good I loved those lines
    "would you pick up if i were to call
    do you think you would be there at all?"
    When your significant othermoves slowly away from you, then the end is near.
    But, I really hope it's just a crysis that all the relationshps go through to get stronger, and I hope thing will work out for you.
    Great poem. 5/5
    Carla

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