Such emotion. very intense.
you have much talent :)

Such emotion. very intense.
you have much talent :)

I was reading it i got chills. that was the most well flowing thing i have ever read. you are such a great writer. i have no more to say than that is was just the best poem i ever read.

You seriously need to be published. This stuff is amazing. You are definately being added to my fav's.

You have so much passion. I honestly dont have any feedback for this one. You dont need to change a thing.

breathtaking