Comments : Your Lie Changed My Life

  • 14 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    This poem has a strong point and your right they wont change they will do it again! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    I trusted you and loved you,
    but you took everything I had.
    You left me crying on your bed
    Never thought you hurt me that bad.

    These are painful words that describes the betrayal by the ones we trust with our heart.
    Unfortunately, we cannot blame the heart for who it falls for.
    A sad and painful piece that shows the anguish of your broken heart quite vividly.
    We never thought and would not believe that the one's we gave our heart to is capable of such hurt.
    Hang in there.
    You've done a good job at expressing your emotions in this sad yet beautifully penned piece.
    Paul...

  • 14 years ago

    by natyy

    Wow, this really foes relate to me a lot, except for the whole baby issue. But its really touching. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Rainbow Writers

    Powerful!