Comments : First time(kinda a bio its wat happened to me)

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Why do you have sex with a guy when he doesn't truly love you and isn't open to the possibility of new life? You shouldn't have sex unless you are open to that possibility, and that why I believe safe sex is after marrige, where the guy isn't just having sex for fun, but as a bond. That's why God created that, so you could become one and show your love, not just using your body but your soul> How can you give your virginity away to a guy that doesn't actually love you who is just doing it for fun, USING YOU??? If you were married and he fully loved you and you were ready for it, you must be open to new life. You don't just use your body but your soul, you unite your love for each other....

    There were tons of grammar errors in this poem, like saying "u" instead of "you", not capitalizing "I" and not using correct punctuation. I thought it was not well-written at all and could be much better. Do you honestly just have sex because it feels good and its fun? Because if so, sex is wayyy more than just that, and that's something that everyone should follow, but they don't. That's how people "think" that this guy they could trust with their body but then he leaves. Where as in marriage, you unite as one and state your vows. 2/5 from me.

    God Bless You and Your Whole Family!
    May Angels Watch Over You All The Days Of Your Life...

    Take Care, Please don't take what I said the wrong way, I just want to preach and teach those because what society tells you these days isn't right at all. You have to follow God's way and follow His way, trust me, your life may go up and down like a rollarcoaster ride, but God has a plan for you. He will lead you and guide you, and if you trust and have ultimate faith in Him, He will grant you eternal life.

    By The Way: I am not judging you at all because you are bi, please don't think that just because I'm a Catholic. You are who you are, and that's fine. Take care and thank you for reading this, may God Bless You!

    ~MaryAnne