This is very tragic poem though I can relate to the theme of not be able to forget a brief infatuation that through fate was cut short

I liked this poem nonetheless
well done

This was really sad and so full of emotion. not your best, but i still liked it. Shanik

Wow this is an interesting write. I like that you have penned this down in a narrative manner. Who would have thought that the girl whom you like would have a tragic fate.But nonetheless you did a great job on this poem.keep it up