by Sylvia
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Excellent! Flowers dancing, smiling, greeting the sun, Spring. Such vivid images. Makes me feel good when I read this. Won't be long until Spring is here. Good Job. 5/5 |
by sneha
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Once again,excellent.You have knit your poem with all beautiful things and they stand together as a testimony for your poetic skills. |
by Melissa
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How you scribe poetry in such a tight form is ambiguous to me. Your words are flawless and despite syllable counts the flow is always melodic. Very beautiful piece here, it deserves recognition! ;o) |
by Cindy
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Meena |
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Absolutely lovely and very breathtaking. You have portrayed such vivid imagery that it takes one's breath away. Not only did you fully entrance me but you never bored or confused the reader, each line was so captivating. A flawless write that was a pleasure to read! 5/5 from me, take care and keep writing, always and forever... |
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Meena, this one is awesome.Beautiful imagery |
by Lonely Rider
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Wonderful blend of different forms... |
by mossgirl19
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Oh my, a very beautiful poem. The haikus are really beautiful. |