Comments : Little Mistake

  • 14 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Aw so sad. :( But it was really well written. I kinda sorta love it. 5/5. Great job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    It's so sad. It's a beautiful poem, but it's also depressing.

    This poems brought tears to my eyes.

    Very well expressed. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by ganjaru

    Nice one ..
    my eyes are brown too they can see pain,

  • 13 years ago

    by ganjaru

    Nice one ..
    my eyes are brown too they can see pain,