"Baby, you don't know the feeling of harsh until you've tried breathing with a broken heart."

- I love this line [out of them all] the most.

It was a great write all the same.
Keep it up.

:)

Great! These are the lines which attracted me the most of all
the last thought on your mind is probably the first on mine
it's like the drugs are pulling me towards you

I enjoyed the flow

OMG... you are amazing... I am just at awe with this write.. everyt line is apt... the concept, the flow and just evrything cauht my attention...
the last line is just amazing....
Keep writing;)
5/5 from me
Good work:)