Comments : Foreign Confessions

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Awww, a very sweet and well written poem. Love the rhyming and flow.

    Great Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I love this my friend. I love and admire the pun sides of you. Keep it up, 5/5, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    I really like this one. The words work well together, and it's really sweet. Great job. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I want you more than everything

    ^^
    This one line made me smile so bright, Azzza. It just comes across as so sincere!

    Your poem has a high feel- good level:)
    Well, I think in love we don't need that many words:) Unless you are in cyber space and words is all you have, off course!

    Lovely, Azzza!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is beautiful I love it

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    There isn't much to say except this was really an enjoyable read. You picked and used your words with imagination and a lot of creativity.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a sweet tender poem of love.

    Foreign words that you say
    Warms and melts my heart away
    Language that's beautifully display
    How I wish you could sway my way

    Love and friendship go beyond the boundries of language. You have expressed this so well in your poem
    Good job!
    Take Care
    Cindy