You write really good poems. XD

Would you mind commenting my poem called "I don't want to say it." with constructive criticism? [It's for the poetic contest.]

Great Poem.Keep Writing!!.Plz comment on some of mine.

Such sorrow through ones heart makes it hard to breathe. Coming up with words to comment on this was even harder. Your pain is a common one which seems to hurt that much more. Very good write. Keep it up. 5/5