Comments : Why do you care?

  • 15 years ago

    by DerXLoveIsDeadX

    Ok wow this is amazing lol
    I love it

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well the title kindda draws me into the poem and it really did live up to it's expectation. Though simple words was used, but how it was conjoint together to form a phrase was great.I can feel a little bit of hidden anger within you when she showed cared for u.

    Your suffering isn't my life anymore
    ^^^ this line stood out for me as you don't consider her anymore part of ur life.

    Excellent Job
    5/5 from me