Great write, very suspenseful at first with good vivid descriptions that make the reader captivated and entranced. Rhyming was excellent and I loved how you set the reader up for something horrible and bad, but the ending was hilarious, absolutely perfect! Nice job, this was such a joy to read, keep up the awesome work!
5/5 from me, take care and keep writing forever..

God Bless You And Your Family!

~MaryAnne