hey wow.. i thought it was good but i have to disagree with paige because i would rather read a really well written poem that is long rather then a short one.. you are able to put more feeling into longer poems.. you did really well but it would have been even better if it was longer.. thats my opinion anyway...

awesum job gurl keep it up.
heather

short but bloody brilliant! i especially loved the last line! well done, julie -xx-