Excellent work, I truly enjoyed each and every line, you have such a way with words. Every line was extremely entrancing to me, and never bored me. The meaning behind those lines was so immense and there was much emotions portrayed. Great descriptions that gave me clear visuals and made me enjoy this write even more!
Nice job, keep writing, always and forever...

5/5 from me, take care and good luck with the contest!

God Bless You!