I like it. It's really good. It re spoke to me a lot. Keep it up 5/5

Many thoughts and emotions seem to mix in this poem. But overall you describe the way you feel quite well.

i exspecially liked how you seemed to describe what you feel, emotionally as well as physically, WELL DONE!

"Your web of intricate lies."
I thought that was really the best line. It makes an image come to mind of phrases into a web. I really like it. 5/5

Your right you shouldnt like it.. you should love it.. its really great.. i dont see why you dont like it..

I like it a lot, it shows a lot of feeling... keep it up! 5/5

I liked it, it had a lot of feeling and i really like the last few lines of the poem. it was good. 5/5

Thats gOOd
its deep
i kan relate

I really love it like i like totally know how you feel

Wow, amazing xx

Beautiful

This piece explains a lot of my own emotions. A great heart felt qrite. I may have to add you to my favourites :)!

Thank you