"I don't give a **** about you or your family / I'm off to get laid"...hahaha

To be honest I'm not sure how I'm reacting to this poem. There's an observable difference in your styles of poetry though, between this one and the other. Personally, I liked the other more. This was a very emotional and angry poem (with some semidecent rhyming), and if it hadn't been for your inclusion of emotionality, it would've earned 2/5.

4/5. Keep it up.

This one lets it all hang out in a contemperary rant
WELL DONE