Comments : Fearful

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Where would I find savior
    From my one and only knight?
    ^ I think this would look good if you'll add 'but' like But from my one and only knight..Also, i think it would look even better if you'll add some other punctuations like comma or hypen something like that to emphasize the tone of the poem.

    Otehrwise the whole poem was good. Flowed perfectly and good word usage..