A Touch of Magic

by Jenna   Mar 31, 2009


A spark when your lips

lightly brush over mine

A fire that can't be extinguished

when our bodies intertwine

Insanity that can't be

cured by a pill

Time moves by so fast

and then seems to stand still

My heart breaks and aches

when you go away

I'll drop down on my knees

and beg you to stay

Your touch is like magic

Your words are a spell

Without you I'm lost

Your charm worked so well

I'll love you for eternity, because you put your spell on me.....

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  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    First of all Jenna congrats on the win! This poem truly deserved it. :]

    You took the title to a whole new place and I love what you did with it. Its exactly what I had in mind when I thought of the title.

    I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme you had because it didnt seem to be forced but rather flowed well with everything you had to say. I liked the meaning behind it. I'm sure many could relate with falling for someone and feeling like you are under their spell. Just that infatuation you feel when theyre around is overwhelming and you described that wonderfully with your nice choice of words. I could imagine everything you were describing which made for this an enjoyable read.

    Well done!
    I really enjoyed it.
    *5/5*

    Bliss. [Beyond a Poet's Mind.]

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