Hey I thought this is for the contest !
I loved the prelude the most, the poem kinda grew weak at the end..but the wording was very intelligent and great =)
Loved the title.
I really missed your poems !
Write on.

Really nice poem.
keep writing.

A very very emotional poem
And one that I felt I could connect with
The poem was full of meaning
I'm glad that it was written n the way it was
As if the flow had been too forced
It may have taken away from the motion

Really good poem

This was a very good poem. This is sadly true though in a lot of relationships. Loved the emotion. Austin

A strong write. I found this poem to be moving and it brings up many questions as to why relationships don't work out

5/5

I miss your writing <3 :) :)

"I never quite understood your reasons
For staying in a dying relationship
There was never any hope between us
Just an empty outlet of lustful words"

This is awesome..omgggg...please please write again!