Comments : This Love

  • 14 years ago

    by Valerie

    I like this poem very much; good job : )
    I think the concept of the story it is trying to tell is very well; the short & sweet poems are my fav hehe. hope the story ends well.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    I loved this poem. It was excellant. The emotion in which you wrote this is good. But it is good as you said to not interfer in other peoples lives. Austin

  • 14 years ago

    by Aaron Martin

    This is well done, i feel that you are confused and having a battle within yourself. very well written though.