Comments : Ubdasbjhasbd Poem Thingy

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very nice free flow and deep questions
    and the last lines intense unspoken answers,
    and where does that leave us.

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow this was sum powerful poem here. deep and great thought were all around your poem. nice flow was well from begining to end. my favorite part... would be

    I've come to realize
    many things,
    But still, I have
    Many questions lingering
    upon my tongue.
    Unspoken thoughts
    often become
    unspoken answers,
    and where does that leave us?

    it gave a strong pull and message on me. and it made me wonder or my question that i never asked and yeah. amazing job.
    5/5

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy