Because I Couldn't Let You Go.....

by Jenna   Apr 5, 2009


Looking down at the blood on my hands,

thinking back on what I've done.

My stomach heaves, as I realize,

the monster I've become.

It didn't have to end this way,

I just thought, if I couldn't have you noone should.

Because noone else could love you,

with their entire being, like I could.

The cold steel blade that did you in, rips into me,

deranged and suicidal I behave.

And now my love, we'll be together forever,

as I join you in your grave.

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  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Wow, i really don't know what to say, it left me speechless even though it was short it still had powerful words and emotion.

    I loved it

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jaklynn

    This is a very sad poem. I like the emotion in it...you portray the feeling well...its a little choppy but I liked it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow.. this is actually quite depressing and sad to read.. I see where the love comes from, but this is just a chilling 'goosebump' read. This wasnt a spectacular poem and didnt blow me away but it was just okay. Lots of I's and you's and ect. words that could be deleted. Some words were great, but the word choice was rather simple.

    A good job,
    decent effort..could use more thought and could be longer.

    5/5.

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