It's goooood :)
the war?
i'm not a fan personally
thing you've described some strong emotions well here

Wow this what i meant you find soem great poems when you read everyone, im so immpressed with this, i was in for almost eight years, very deep and touching interesting you would think of this

Good detail, well written. easy to put a picture in the readers mind. Good job

I like. War is just a manifestation of our anger in my opinion to be taken out on others because they won't give what they have to another. That's just my opinion. Sometimes I wish we could put down the weapons and finally understand each other.