Comments : Contemplation

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Questions we all ponder at one time or another. As for you, I believe you will be remembered as a good and kind man, husband and father, tough but with a soft side. Well done with this one.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    So many questions....most of which have no real answer, Grant.
    All that really matter is what, you yourself have to say about this. Be aware of your own actions and live life to the best you can. No one said it has to be flawless, from the mistakes you make you learn even more than from the things that came easy.
    Respect is an important issue. I feel that people who lack of it, ultimately have no respect for themselves. Treat the other like you want to be treated yourself is the best advice I can give you.

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Exelent Poem Grant , I often wonder these things myself............... 5/5 Jim

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Ive never quite been placed into the mind of Grant before.. seems like youve been thinking and contemplating about several things lately.. interesting write. Full of questions and thoughts looking for answers.

    5/5.
    Temps. :]

  • 14 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Hey Grant I think I liked almost every part of this poem and you did a great job penning it. The right words and placement was key and the emotions filled in to make it all work. I especially like the question to the reader in your last stanza. good thoughts to carry and contemplate. we should ask ourselves these questions.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cara

    All questions that we wish to find answers to.. if you ever find out, be sure to let me know. I have missed your poetry, its very.. you.
    I like how you switched it around at the end, i thought that was well done, it kept me interested.
    Really awesome work Grant. :]
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Grant, a lot of questions here to cotemplate - lol :D

    I see this as a poem that voices what alot of us contemplate. All we can change is today and tomorrow. History is just that, history. We hope that we are remembered in the best way and I am sure a man of your character will be a man who will be remembered for that.

    Well done

    Michael