Wow. That is so beautiful. Its a wonderful poem which im guessing is gunna be another relatable piece. I know i used to be able to relate to it. Its a strong worded poem, but at the same time, so simply written. I think that in a few lines, the flow is a bit rough, maybe one or two words could be changed. But apart from that i loved this. Its excellent. Keep it up. 5/5 xx

No one has ever held me how you did today,
No one has ever opened my heart and made me feel this way.
No one has ever kissed and touched me in the way you do,
No one has ever made me want to truly say-"I love you".

*I like how you repeat "No one" That's something I would do. I like how clear your emotions are. You don't over do it with a bunch of imagery, you tell it like it is. I admire that*

I've opened up to you in ways I've never done before,
But do you share my feelings strong and how can i be sure?
I don't want to say those 3 little words and have you turn away,
I don't want those 3 little words to be ones that you can't say.

*I can really relate to what you're saying here. I love how you aren't afraid to tell us how you really feel Nice*

So do I go out on a whim and take a leap of fate,
Or do I keep them in my throat and 'til you say them-wait.
I really hope you feel the same, it's a lot to ask-it's true,
But all I want is you to want to say "I love you" too.

*I really liked this. It was simple and easy to read. The flow was constant and the style is one of my favorites. Keep it up. Nik*