Wow, such an excellent and I must say unique piece! I, to be honest with you, have a fear of spiders, and your descriptions were so vivid and clear in my mind. You created a scene that the reader can relate to and understand. I have never heard of a poem about this fear, so I appluad you for your originality! 5/5 from me, take care and God Bless!

~MaryAnne

Great poem

this is an interesting poem
spiders are an interesting
species...
this is a good poem although i think you could have done better with this one

it still i think deserves a 5/5 which is what i gave it

good job:D:D

Keenan

great