This poem is amazing and it hits home thank you for sharing it with us 5/5

Tammi,

Excellent piece, very sad but very well written. The flow was perfect. I did find a couple typos, but that is okay. If you re-read the poem, I'm sure you'd find them. And I truly hope that this poem, wasn't what you are feeling yourself or doing to yourself.

As for a title I may have one "Screaming On the Inside"

5/5 -ENE-

Well done. Verrry relatable piece, really hits home for me too. again, i must say, that you have an amazing talent, you write with sooo much emotion, and it truly shows in this piece especially.To me, your writes really have the ability to keep the reader reading until the very end. Truly amazing once again. 5/5 great job.