Simply perfect! Awe inspiring!

This was a cute topic to write a poem about, and you're first two couplets are cute attention grabbers.

However because it was such an attention grabber, the rest of the piece couldn't reach the bar, and its easily to see the parts where you just ran out of imagination and rhythm.

I dont..understand the ending XD.
It was too random and unecessary for the whole piece.

3/5

Hello. Yeah, what do want to tell us in the end? Where's Polo really? But it was a great poem. LOved reading it.

I'm not certain that you understand the metaphor -.-