It Wasn't You

Feelings piling up like dirty laundry
Weeks of emotions unable to escape
I'm holding it in for way to long
And it was you who threw me away

*Wow love the first line. That's so original. I can really relate to what you're saying in this stanza. Very nice way to start*

My body begins to shake like the leaves
I'm scared of what might start to become
So trying to to straighten myself out
And it was you you kept the secrets

*Nice work. I love the way you write. It's very simple but what your saying is so powerful. Very deep and emotional. I'm really loving this poem*

My mind is scrambling with missing pieces
I'm loosing memory of who you are
Your becoming nothing to me now
And it wasn't you who wanted to help

*I love how you ended it. I like how each stanza had it's own set of emotions. This was like a little story. Very great work. Shanik*