Comments : Invincible

  • 14 years ago

    by Obscura

    Brilliant poem i liked it a lot the rythem was good and the words went well together

    well done

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    "lessons of life
    tattooed on her mind
    six shots of vodka
    is all she need
    to erase away all her regrets." I really enjoyed reading this poem. This is my favorite stanza. Great choice of words. very well done,kel.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy Miller

    Awwww, I love this " no matter where you are, theres a reason for you to be here. Very true. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The rhythm and rhyme here deliver a very important wisdom at the end

    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 14 years ago

    by Fear2love

    I really like this so much