wow this was so incredibly sad. im really sorry for ur loss. u captured emotion and pain very well in this and i loved it

Wow Tyler, umm im kind of speechless right now. I was crying when i read your poem it reminds me of something one of my friends went through. You poem was beautifully written and you captured so much emotion it was unbelievable!

Wow!! That was.....SOOOOOO sad. I....I'm speechless as well. Wonderful job and I'm so so sorry!!!
Amy

Hey Tyler,
Wow that is a very touching poem! I love alot of your poems! You put alot of emotion in them and not many people do! Your sister must be very lucky to have a brother like you! You are truly one in a million! My brother would do ne thing for me too! He would take a bullet in a second for me if it meant life or death! I just wanted to let you know that you have an amazing talent and hope you don't even forget that! Well, I hope to read more and all! Keep them on coming!!! Lots Of Love!

-Carrie-

no peopel this wasnt about me... about my friend... and i guess not alot of people caught onto the idea behind it.... he died... and his dad is in jail.... he sacraficed himself to save his sister...

great job, it really touched me. *clap clap clap..*

oh wow... this is terribly sad...

but so well written... the conversation at the beginning was a great way to set it up!

This is an amazing poem to say the least. You have such a knack for writing, im so envious!!! Great job and keep writing. Your deffinatley going on my favorites list! That's so horrible about your friend.......:-(