Comments : Fair Phantom

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I cannot find a thing I would change Your rhythm and rhyme paints a vivid portrait

  • 14 years ago

    by damont

    Lovely poem and the title made me want to read it and your flow is really nice. wonderful poem keep writing

  • 13 years ago

    by Nicko

    This has a softness of spirit that i like.. It flows off the tongue with good rhyme and meter...nice work