If love were a star;
I'd wish it to
..................f
..................a
..................l
..................l
..........through me,
I like the way you have written this. It gives
that effect of wanting to catch love. The
third verse is my favourite one! Loved the
read :)

Excellent writing there, Melissa! I can never find anything to fault in your writing. :-)

This is amazingly good. :)

It is sad to think of love we may have missed being to involved in other things and thoughts, not seeing what was there in front of us. Well done.

It is good sarting is marvelous.

Great writing, I like the imagery of the falling stars. Keep it up (:

I really love how the imagery in this goes from the brilliance of a star as its falling to the darkness of insomnia.
Perfection in every line! Keep it up, Holly