Thinking if my life less
-- I'm not really sure what you were trying to say here. o.O

And my emotion is loosed
-- Not really sure with that one either.. Maybe it was a typo or something, or maybe I'm just not smart enough to get it. Haha

Anyways..
I think I liked this poem more than the other one. It just felt like there was more emotion in it, and it came from your heart. Like you didn't try to think of things to write, it just sort of happened. I love poems like that. :]

Seeing a full blood lake
-- That line was a little disturbing.. but I liked it. lol

I noticed that you used the word or form of the word "Confused". I like that you used it, but sometimes it's not good to over use it. Maybe change some of them up with a different word? Maybe dazed. I like that one. Haha. You don't have to if you don't want to though.

Inside,froze to the core
-- You should put a space after the comma. :]

I really did like this poem.
[:

Keep writing.

Cayce

By the way.. I read in your profile that you liked Linkin Park. They're like my favorite band, and this poem sounds like them. XD

Just thought I'd say that.

There was some repetition in this with the word 'confusion' but overall, that was your main point was to talk about the confusion you face. Many emotions running through your words, clearly felt by the reader. I thought you did well with this, again. Your word choice is quite simple but it works well.

5/5.
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