Comments : Scabs

  • 14 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Very different, I never read a poem abot scabs before. Im impressed its very creative and flowed great. Kept my attention and also made me think.
    WELL DONE.
    =)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lori

    This is so unbelievably impressive. I love how you compared the pain in life to the pain in a scab. That really quite brilliant! And like nothing I have ever read in in my ife. You are really quite talented Rachel :) I really enjoyed this. It also gave off a sense of uniqueness in it. It's what makes it Rachels poem. :)

    Great job 5/5

    <3 Loni